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mauiman
05-01-2007, 04:42 PM
I've changed my site's description too many times. I need some input from SEO-savvy, marketing-savvy folks.

The two directories are niche directories serving moms (momz dot com) and dads (dadz dot com).

Here's my latest:
"Mom-focused human edited web directory of quality, family-friendly, and spam-free sites with categories uniquely organized for ease-of-use by a mother. Free reciprocal, paid featured and paid standard listings are available in our SEO-friendly directory."

I want to try to keep "mom", "mother" in there and perhaps add "parenting" and more relevant keywords, but I don't want to overdo it.

Anyone submitting a suggestion will have their sites (up to 2) added to either or both of my directories by hand, by me (to save you the trouble). It's not much, but I DO appreciate the help.:D

Thanks!

David aka mauiman